Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment Corrected sentence #1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice. Corrected sentence #2: To ensure success, the teachers should require the ones - doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment in the project.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project Corrected sentence #1: Darnel has no reason to question the instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam. Corrected sentence #2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks needed for class and our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish Corrected sentence #1: Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time we didn't know that she had. Corrected sentence #2: The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of our members to end the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration Corrected sentence #1: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected. Corrected sentence #2: Irregardless of what Grandpa says, It'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside from our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide Corrected sentence #1: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome to children outside our neighborhood. Corrected sentence #2: Neither Ben nor I know the definition of the word "chide" because we haven't read the assignment.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the race between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning Corrected sentence #1: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. Corrected sentence #2: The race among the three relay teams is close, none of the them is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert Corrected sentence #1: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, emphasizing on African Americans. Corrected sentence #2: Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bright the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information Corrected sentence #1: My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight. Corrected sentence #2: At the end of her speech, Amanda told us that if I need further information, do not hesitate to ask her
DOL 11
Sentence 1: having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i coudnt finish my homework pra cticing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert Corrected sentence #1: Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. Corrected sentence #2: There were too many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert Corrected sentence #1: Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. Corrected sentence #2: There were too many things to do; I couldn't finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip Corrected sentence #1: Mr. Guarino told us that the twenty-fourth corp, which was assigned to Germany after World War II helped maintain peace in their country. Corrected sentence #2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Samantha requested a plane ticket to the United States at the end of her trip.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted Corrected sentence #1: "I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia. Corrected sentence #2: "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out Corrected sentence #1: He was incidentally unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion; he just couldn't make it because he lived too far away. Corrected sentence #2: Irregardless of the effect of poor weather, the Shakespeare's play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected sentence #1: You should have followed three steps: first,open the hood; second, check the level and lastly add more oil. Corrected sentence #2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit Corrected sentence #1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government? Corrected sentence #2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here Corrected sentence #1: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car speeding. Corrected sentence #2: After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the side of school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early Corrected sentence #1: "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, 'than your comments." Corrected sentence #2: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate consequently; she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports Corrected sentence #1: Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican. Corrected sentence #2: This car, a 1996 Mustang, extremely valuable now, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars report.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old Corrected sentence #1: Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice. Corrected sentence #2: I believe that they mentioned on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated Corrected sentence #1: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible. Corrected sentence #2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected sentence #1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe everyone should practice.
Corrected sentence #2: To ensure success, the teachers should require the ones - doing the experiment- to have new lab equipment in the project.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Corrected sentence #1: Darnel has no reason to question the instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam.
Corrected sentence #2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks needed for class and our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected sentence #1: Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time we didn't know that she had.
Corrected sentence #2: The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of our members to end the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected sentence #1: You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Corrected sentence #2: Irregardless of what Grandpa says, It'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside from our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected sentence #1: Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome to children outside our neighborhood.
Corrected sentence #2: Neither Ben nor I know the definition of the word "chide" because we haven't read the assignment.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the race between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected sentence #1: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Corrected sentence #2: The race among the three relay teams is close, none of the them is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected sentence #1: Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, emphasizing on African Americans.
Corrected sentence #2: Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bright the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected sentence #1: My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Corrected sentence #2: At the end of her speech, Amanda told us that if I need further information, do not hesitate to ask her
DOL 11
Sentence 1: having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i coudnt finish my homework pra cticing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected sentence #1: Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Corrected sentence #2: There were too many things to do, I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected sentence #1: Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Corrected sentence #2: There were too many things to do; I couldn't finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected sentence #1: Mr. Guarino told us that the twenty-fourth corp, which was assigned to Germany after World War II helped maintain peace in their country.
Corrected sentence #2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Samantha requested a plane ticket to the United States at the end of her trip.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected sentence #1: "I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Corrected sentence #2: "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected sentence #1: He was incidentally unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion; he just couldn't make it because he lived too far away.
Corrected sentence #2: Irregardless of the effect of poor weather, the Shakespeare's play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected sentence #1: You should have followed three steps: first,open the hood; second, check the level and lastly add more oil.
Corrected sentence #2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
Corrected sentence #1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he off student government?
Corrected sentence #2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected sentence #1: Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car speeding.
Corrected sentence #2: After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the side of school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early
Corrected sentence #1: "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, 'than your comments."
Corrected sentence #2: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate consequently; she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected sentence #1: Yes, they are going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Corrected sentence #2: This car, a 1996 Mustang, extremely valuable now, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars report.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected sentence #1: Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Corrected sentence #2: I believe that they mentioned on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected sentence #1: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Corrected sentence #2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.